She squealed in excitement as the wheels left the ground. The flight instructor was speaking about the basics of controlling the plane, but her thoughts kept creeping back to him. That man and his absurd rules. Her blood boiled for a second, but she shook her head to rid those thoughts.
He no longer had control over her. She was experiencing freedom like never before by sitting in the driver’s seat of this old plane.
It had been a long battle, a long struggle, but now it was her time to live. She was celebrating her victory in the sky.
This is from Jenny Matlock's Saturday Centus ... super fun! You should play too!
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This was very powerful. Nice job indeed.
ReplyDeleteGreat way to fly....
ReplyDeletesubtly powerful, very nicely done.
Mine is here
Happy Saturday!
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shakira
I would personally like to invite you to join a meme which I host?
Weekend Funnies
please take a look...
It runs weekly from Friday to Sunday.
This week's posthere
Have you an AWESOME weekend!
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shakira
I like the independence shown by Sara in this - great job! :)
ReplyDeleteThat is how I feel right now wish I could afford flying lessons
ReplyDelete"She was celebrating her victory in the sky."
ReplyDeleteI loved this so much. It really makes you want to root for Sara. Good job.
Excellent entry Christy! I love Jenny but I have resisted this meme due to the 100 word limit. Lord knows I have too many words. Just not sure I could do it. I may try one of these days.
ReplyDeletePerhaps we should all learn to fly!!
ReplyDeletewoo-hoo , you go girl! :p
ReplyDeleteAnother really interesting post. This time I want to know what happened BEFORE this piece! Brill!
ReplyDeleteI second what jfb57 said. You left me wanting more! Great job. I'm
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Excellent! Flying is such a great way to express freedom and victory!
ReplyDeleteThe taste of freedom!! Good job!
ReplyDeleteOH WAY TO GO. I can totally relate to this one (except I have never been in control of a plane!) Well done.
ReplyDeleteFreedom! Soaring through the sky! What a delicious thought. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI love your parallel stories...Really awesome twist on the prompt! I suspect you have some stories to tell on this one!
ReplyDeleteI was really intriqued with this post...it made me really wonder.
Great use of the prompt x
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